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:The Oath of the Guardian Angels:
"We, the Guardian Angels, have been around for thousands of years, protecting the land of Gielinor from all the evil, from all the darkness that could ever come to it. We will never fail"



SERPENT'S SLAVE
It's the year 1495, the land is white and there are no birds singing. It's been ages since it was summer. A dark force has been roaming the earth for a long time.

Somewhere, in a deep dark cave a dark Wizard is floating before a weird glowing rock. He is speaking an ancient language. It looks like he's trying to summon something out of the ground. Something terrible evil.



STORY OF THE HUMAN
Dark clouds are rising above the castle of Romentin. It is starting to rain heavily.
A royal female awakes from her sleep. She had a terrible nightmare about evil. She couldn't sleep any further because of the storm. As she stands up and walks to the window, she sees a light between those dark clouds. The light suddenly moves. It looks like the light is coming towards the Castle.

The female goes through the gates to get a clear shot of the light. As the light comes closer and suddenly floats before the human. From the light, a figure is formed. It looks like a man is floating before her, except the man has wings. Could it be? Are the legends true? An Angel, a Guardian Angel is standing before her. As he lands softly, he says the woman's name.



THE MEETING
The Angel with his wings spread stands proud before the woman. As he calls her by her name, and tells her why he has come. He has come to warn her for the Evil that is coming. And she knows that. The Guardian gives her an assignment, with these words: "Stand Guard and Pray for me, for I will come to fight for you. As you will give me love and strength, so we can defeat this Evil by hand!"



SO IT BEGINS
The Guardian Angel stands up and spread his wings, and he flies back to Heaven. She has already seen  a glimpse of the evil waking up under the ground. So it begins...



LEADING THE ARMY
Red walls, dust and fire. That's what is underground. Hell.
A demon, standing on a huge pillar, looking above his army of darkness. Horrible and ugly creatures from the underground waiting for the command of their Leader. The Demon stands up, ready for his speech.

These words are spoken: "TOO LONG! FOR TOO LONG WE'RE HERE! CAST OUT TO THE UNDERGROUND! CORRUPTED THAT IS WHAT WE ARE! IT'S ALL THE FAULT OF THESE HUMANS, A WEAK RACE PROTECTED BY GOD. IT IS TIME FOR US TO HAVE THOSE LANDS. WE SHOULD HAVE THE EARTH! AND WE WILL HAVE IT!"
The army inspired by his words, ready to depart to the surface! "NOW GO!" yells the Demon. And the army leaves the underground.



THE ESCAPE
The creatures are escaping from hell, heading to the surface. A large opening is made in the middle of a forest, not to far from the castle. Ugly creatures are streaming out of the gap. Giving destruction and pulverization everywhere! They're burning down the forest, destroying houses, eating those poor forest animals alive. And finally the leader comes out of the gap and screams! His roar is magnificent. It's like the world is shaking and falling apart!



THE CALL
The female sees the demon and the smoke in the distance, as soon as possible she starts to pray. The demon can hear her prayers and goes to her. The demon is getting closer and closer to the castle. His dark wings are spread and ready to demolish the girl.
But when he is about to strike, a protected barrier reflects the attack and the Demon knows it's the Guardian Angel his fault. And he yells: "YOU'LL BURN IN HELL! YOU FUCKING WHORE!!"



YOUR PRAYERS HAVE BEEN HEARD
Suddenly, the Demon and the girl hear a trumpet. A cry of Valor. After the sound a major light is coming out of the sky, burning the eyes of the Demon. The girl looks up in the sky and sees the Angel and his brothers. Dozens of flying Angels heading for war.

The Guardian lands before the female and starts to sing: "Baby don't cry, don't scream, just close your eyes and pretend this is a dream!" While he comforts the woman, his brothers are landing hard on the ground, one at a time. Standing in a line ready to battle those creatures.
Now he flies up and attacks the leader of the horde.
The battle has begun...



WE WON'T WIN THIS
The horde is too powerful for the army of the Heavens. There numbers are great.
The angels have no change against fighting that Evil, they're losing the battle, this is not suppose to happen.



LOSING THE BATTLE
The Angel has noticed that the Evil army is too strong. But we can't give up. We can't give up now! But the angel sees his brothers fall. Cursed those evil creatures. There must be a way to defeat this evil...?
The Guardian Angel is so upset, seeing his brethren fall and fall after each other. But then he confronts the demon again. More powerful than ever.
The demon laughing and spotting the Angel. As he explains the angel's army never had a change against them.
The demons hits and crashes the Angel, like a little bug. The Guardian is near his dead.
All is lost...

But is it really all lost?



HOPE IS NEAR
The destruction continues, burning the castle and the woods. The demon leaves the Angel to his fate. As the Guardian Angel lies there, the girl runs to him. She looks at him and lies her hand on his chest.



BELIEVE IS OUR CURE
As he looks back at her, he lies his hand or her shoulder. Barely able to speak he tries to say to her: "I will not fall, not when you're in danger. Believe in me and give me strength so I can protect you and Humanity! Urgh!"
He releases his hand and closes his eyes. The woman can't control herself and weeps a tear.



RECOVERY
A gap opens in the sky, light streaks are reaching the body of the angel.
The girl looks astonishing when she sees the body lifting up. The light is amazing, glitters are falling out of the the sky instead of ashes.



OUR LAST STAND
While the body floats, the other angels their bodies are lifting up too. It got the army of Darkness their attention. And by a miracle the Angels have been revived. Brought back from the Oblivion.
The evil creatures are thrilled with what they just saw. The army of the Heavens standing again before them. And they do not look happy. A red glow is coming out of their eyes, lightning shoots out of the sky.!
A storm is coming.
This is their Last Stand.
Salvation is near.
The Leader of the Guardian Angels strikes first. Flying to the demon at the speed of light. Hitting him in the chest and takes him up in the air. Heaven's army destroying each and every horrible creature with powerful attacks.
The Angel is taking the Demon further into the sky. They reach out of the sky, leaving the planet. Going towards the sun. He releases the Demon, and the demon gets pulled to the sun by the sun's gravity. The bigger you are, the harder you fall...

But it's not over yet. The Angel must escape the sun's gravity too. He tries and he succeeds.



THE WAR IS OVER
The army of the heavens are waiting for the Guardian Angel to return.
Waiting, to see one return...

Suddenly behind the clouds, they see him. Wounded but alive.
And so the Earth is saved from the creatures from Hell. There is hope again.
Then the sun appears again. Flowers are growing. Dark clouds are vanishing. Winter is over and the darkness is gone. The army of the Heavens vanishes with the dark clouds. The war is over.

The woman returns home, with the sunshine glowing on her face. She thinks about him. Will her savior meet her again?




~The Rapture~

Thank you for reading
Story made by me: Jento Pieters
I am doing a short-movie. And this is the official text/story version. I'll be using After Effects, Element 3D plugin, Cinema 4D, Hitfilm 3 to create this short-movie. All on my own.
Watch it here:
www.youtube.com/techrodd
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kusakaice Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
this sounds awesome!! are you guna do part 2??
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DenJento Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Well I'm not sure, maybe :]
But I have alternative stories, I can place them on Deviantart too.
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kusakaice Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
i see ....i'd like to see your other stories :)
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